Showing posts with label manuscript watch. Show all posts
Showing posts with label manuscript watch. Show all posts

14 April 2019

Encore Worth the Wait: behind the scenes

Pages from the notebook I used while writing Encore Worth the Wait. These are the timelines I used as a guide and I constantly referred to them. I don’t outline per se, but I keep notes about scenes that need to happen. For this book timelines were important to chart how Rob and Jamie grew up together and how their relationship changed over the years, and also to chart the trajectory of their group, Poor Forbes.
The notes were written using Frixion erasable pens – and I did a lot of erasing!
⬆︎ Calendar of the key days between Jamie’s birthday and Rob’s birthday in the book’s present day.

⬆︎ List of Poor Forbes albums with singles indicated, arranged by Rob’s age, with notes about when life events happened. I initially titled “The Best Lean Years” as “The Best Least Years” but changed it in the final draft. In the upper left corner is a list of Jamie’s sisters and the difference in age between them and Jamie.

⬆︎ Key events leading up to and after Jamie’s departure, listed by Rob’s age from 48 to Jamie’s 53rd birthday.


23 July 2016

Coming soon!

Provinces of Touch promo image; artwork by x_art

Jun, a healer with an unpredictable gift, yearns to overcome his troubled past. His solitude is shattered by the arrival of Tlar, a wounded young man from a distant land. Helping this stranger opens up new worlds filled with adventure -- but also brings shocking danger and tragedy. Can Jun finally find true friendship and love? Or will his actions cause a catastrophic invasion and the extinction of his people?

31 January 2016

Rewrites

Got a lot of useful comments on the first draft, now in rewriting mode. Lots of things to think about, because my view of the settings, characters, and story evolved over time. Do I try to recapture my initial impressions and stick to that vision? Or do I reset everything to adhere to a new vision? My gut tells me to go with the path of least resistance, the one that will go faster. Unfortunately, my gut doesn't know which path that is! We shall see...

In the meantime, reading recs:
Lynn Flewelling
Ricardo Pinto
Beth Shannon
Martha Wells

01 November 2015

Progress, if slowly

First draft finally finished. Now to begin refinements.

Credit for keeping me focused during the long process: iced chai tea, rosemary aromatherapy oil, and music.

08 March 2015

Time flies

(“I would but I don’t have a watch,” is what we would always reply when I was a kid. No idea where that old gag came from.)

Work on the new book progresses, but not as quickly as I wanted.

Wanted to share this link from the New York Public Library blog: Not Just Coming Out Stories. To the list of fantasy authors recommended in a comment, I would add Lynn Flewelling, whose Nightrunner series of books remains a favorite that I reread (and I’m not a big rereader).

03 November 2014

On writing habits

I'm fascinated to hear my friends discuss their writing habits because no two people have the same ones. I will try new methods I hear about but ultimately fall back to my old, ingrained ways.

I don't outline much. I'll have sketchy road maps in my mind and occasionally jotted down, but between the landmarks is a lot of open space. I usually don't know how the story will end when I begin writing it, and this is undoubtedly a weakness and not a method I would recommend. Writing definitely gets easier once I can see what the ending will be.

That being said, I love being surprised when I write. In the last 6000 words I wrote for my next project, my protagonist met several characters I didn't know existed and did things I never saw coming. Even if these 6000 words change or disappear in the final version, the surprise gave me an energy that will drive the story forward. That's exciting.

I envy writers who can design a strict writing schedule and timetable and stick with it. For me, it tends to be feast or famine:  a lot of writing all at once or a lot of procrastination and no discernible progress.

One tip I got from a friend has helped a lot: spend at least one hour a week on the story. Even if I only open the file and read it or do minor tweaks, it's spending time with it. It's easy to underestimate the importance of just spending time with what you're writing and to beat yourself up for not getting more words written down. But the more time you spend with what you're writing, the more familiar and comfortable you are with it. It establishes a place in your mind and claims some territory your imagination will keep wandering into until you're thinking about it then writing it.

I make lots of short, cryptic notes. Many of them are on paper because if something comes to mind while I'm away from home, I need to write it down. I learned the hard way that if I didn't, the next time I opened the file, I wouldn't remember that great idea I had.

Lots of times I open the file, look at the notes, and the ideas aren't great anymore. That's fine. The note serves its purpose, though: it reminds me of what I was thinking about. I have to review it. Was it a problem I thought I had solved? Was it a solution to a problem I didn't have? Was it an upcoming scene I've changed my mind about? Was it a revision to an existing scene that I should consider?

A lot of the notes are ideas for character names. Names are difficult, no matter the genre. I need to like a character's name if I'm going to be writing about that character a lot.

What I said earlier about procrastination? As in, updating the blog...

30 December 2013

Postseason musings

The regular NFL and college seasons are already over. It's still frustrating not to see my favorite teams' games because I don't live in a particular area, and the highlights on NFL Network recaps aren't good enough. I can't predict who will make it to the Super Bowl, although there are definitely some frontrunners in the Denver Broncos and Seattle Seahawks. But anything can happen during the playoffs!

An interesting link: Gay players on the 1993 Houston Oilers.

A current read: Death Below Zero by Richard Anderson. I love mystery novels, and the unusual setting intrigued me.

An upcoming read: Fair Catch by Del Darcy.

Manuscript watch: I hope to have a little something released in the winter/spring of 2014. The first draft is in revision, and I've reached out to the same wonderful artist who designed the cover of Safety Net and hope to get another beautiful cover.

I have another story in mind, entirely new. It's in the "gel" stage: the elements need to come together and I can start writing. Once I get at least one scene clearly mapped out, I can start -- even if that scene ultimately never makes it into the story.

Happy New Year! Best wishes for 2014.

09 January 2013

Manuscript: Completion!

The manuscript is complete! There is a beautiful cover! ISBNs have been purchased! As soon as I (a) get some details back from my cover designer and (b) sit down and thoroughly read the Amazon "publish with us," the book will be ready for primetime, in Kindle and E-Pub formats. So excited! I also need to ask my editor for feedback on the blurb I wrote. Writing a good blurb is definitely a specific skill.

It's good to have the excitement of the getting the book out now that the college football season is over. All the activities leading up to the NFL draft are interesting, too, but nothing is better than a game, of course.

11 October 2012

Manuscript: Rewrites!

This week I got the manuscript back from my editor and had a long phone call with her about structure. Then another long phone call with a supportive friend who helped me bounce ideas back and forth. I've finished the copy-editing corrections and now it's time for rewrites. Eeeeek and/or yay? It'll be interesting to get close to the characters again after all this time. I started the manuscript last Thanksgiving. Time flies.

Ambient reading:
Take Your Eye Off the Ball: How to Watch Football by Knowing Where to Look by Pat Kirwan.

24 July 2012

Manuscript: The Horror of the Notes

A few notes to myself during the writing stage. I also have a bunch of research material saved as PDFs or TIFFs.

Manuscript watch: Sent to editor! Still waiting to hear back. I changed the working title. And I may have found a book cover artist. If only I had ideas for what the cover should look like... 

Ambient reading:
Bissinger, Buzz. "Why College Football Should be Banned." The Wall Street Journal, May 8, 2012.
Branch, Taylor. "The Shame of College Sports." The Atlantic Monthly, October 2011.
Hinton, Matt. "Billionaire Ball: Epitaph for the Student-Athlete." The Baffler, No. 20, July 11, 2012. [Full-text available for pay-per-view or to subscribers]


28 June 2012

Manuscript: The Soundtrack

Manuscript watch: at the 90% mark in the latest read-through before sending it to the editor. (Oh, I am so happy I found an editor!)

Current reads:   
* And God Said: How Translations Conceal the Bible's Original Meaning
* Empires of the Word: A Language History of the World



Recent reads:
* Bowled Over: Big-Time College Football from the Sixties to the BCS Era
* Home & Away: The Rise and Fall of Professional Football on the Banks of the Ohio, 1919-1934


, but then I spent a long time with this playlist that iTunes calls "Fire 2":
Fire - Kasabian (West Ryder Pauper Lunatic Asylum)
Reason or Rhyme - Bryan Ferry (Olympia)
Paradise - Shinhwa (State of the Art)
Light Travels - Simple Minds (Graffiti Soul)
Empire (Album Version) - Kasabian (Empire)
Bloodsport - Killing Joke (Killing Joke (remastered))
Breakdown - Epik High (Breakdown)
Higher Love - Depeche Mode (Songs of Faith and Devotion)
Moscow Underground - Simple Minds (Graffiti Soul)
T.O.P. - Shinhwa (My Choice)
Me Oh My - Bryan Ferry (Olympia)
Stillness of Heart - Lenny Kravitz (Lenny)
そらいろ - Porno Graffitti (Porno Graffitti)
More Than This - Roxy Music (Avalon)
Stars Will Lead the Way - Simple Minds (Graffiti Soul)
Alphaville - Bryan Ferry (Olympia)
Fast Fuse - Kasabian (West Ryder Pauper Lunatic Asylum)
Last Trip - Kasabian (Empire)

When the first draft was finished, I moved on to Shinhwa's The Return album, and lately the soundtrack for re-reads and edits has been Neil Finn's Try Whistling This album. I hadn't listened to it in years, and suddenly it popped into my head and I had to listen to it again. What a wonderful album. A real treat to return to after a long silence.